100 WC 2-20-2020 Graham

One day I was walking past a dusty ally and I saw a giraffe being tarred and feathered with pink feathers. It looked very painful. I ran over to the giraffe and helped it get all the tar and pink feathers off of the giraffe. The giraffe was grateful and happy that I helped the giraffe. Later that day the giraffe sang out in happiness. I was very happy that the giraffe was happy.

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  1. You did some great editing work on this piece, and it shows! The flow of events is coherent and the point of view is consistent. I'm glad you were able to pull some of your learning from Social Studies into your writing!

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