100 WC 2-20-2020 Sadie
¨I´m going up to the attic,¨ I shouted down the stairs.
¨Okay,¨ Mom replied. I climbed the very steep and dusty stairs to the attic. When I got up the stairs I saw a light pink giraffe sitting in the corner. I was walking towards the giraffe, when suddenly it started to glow. I backed up until I fell over a pile of boxes, it was very painful. ¨I probably sprained my ankle,¨ I muttered. Then the giraffe floated over to where I was sitting and sang/screamed a lovely song. I thought I was going crazy.
Your piece is so coherent--it completely makes sense. It would make a great beginning for a longer fiction piece!
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