100 WC 2-20-2020 Ellie

One day there was a pink giraffe in the Africa section of the zoo. His name was Bob. He always sang for the crowd of people. He was walking in the dusty dirt when a rock hit him in the head. He screamed. Hundreds of years later he woke up from his coma.He was excited to see his friends again when he got back to the exhibit. He said it was very painful to get hit by a rock. Then out of nowhere, he died. “Probably died of old age” his friends said as they walked away very slowly.

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  1. Foxteach1February 22, 2020 at 9:48 AM

    This is a very coherent piece with a great ending, and the words are worked in seamlessly!

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