100 WC 2-20-2020 Caleigh

“Ashley stop singing” I say. My sister sang so much it was painful to hear. We were at the zoo then I saw a dusty giraffe. It opened its mouth and I saw the tongue, pink then I saw its throat dark red. It hasn't been getting water. I see water in the stream out of reach of the giraffe and an empty cup. I grab it and fill it with water then I give it to him. Then I walk away hoping people will take care of it with my sister behind me singing supercalifragilisticexpialidocious as we walked away.


  1. This is so sad! But I'm glad the narrator was able to help the giraffe, and naming that particular song at the end gives me a great sense of the narrator's mood after helping the giraffe.


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