100 WC Ellie 9/13

“Good day sir, how is your day?” “My day is fine!” “Would you like to talk business with me?” Im selling some stuff like this beautiful cloth. Made of the finest of silk!” “How much are we talking?” “We’re talking about $3.00.” “That's a little out of my price range.” “ How about if my make it $1.00, and you give me that dashing coat.” “Okay it's a deal. Let's discuss this over lunch. See you at 12:05 at the diner down the street. We'll make the trade there.” 2 hours later. “ Okay let's make this quick. Here!”

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  1. Foxteach1September 14, 2019 at 1:43 PM

    I love the way you considered the time setting of this photo, and made it clear with your word choice ("finest of silk", "dashing coat") and money references. Be sure to edit and paragraph carefully to help your reader follow your piece.

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