100 WC Alyssa 9/13

By the looks of the statue it looks like these gentlemen are friends disagreeing About something important and they are mad about it and There not happy that there disagreeing about it.

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  1. Foxteach1September 14, 2019 at 1:51 PM

    You took some time to think deeply about what was happening in the photo, even taking into account the emotions the two men may be feeling. Your next step would be to take those ideas and instead of telling your readers about it, show them by writing the full scene/story.

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