100 Word Challenge: 11/16/2018 Parker, 5K

One day a pretty yellow gorilla was running and little did he know he that the gorilla was about to run into a wall made of bricks and KABLAM! The gorilla slams into the wall and breaks his nose.But good thing it was only his nose or he would be in more pain than he is already in.The good thing is that now billy bob joe is all better.

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  1. UnknownNovember 18, 2018 at 5:50 AM

    I am glad he was able to heal from his injury.

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  2. StMolaga5November 19, 2018 at 11:29 AM

    Hi,
    Well done on your entry this week. You've managed to get all the prompt words into your story. In fact you've put them all into the first sentence! You could have used some extra words to add some detail to your story.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin , Ireland
    https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

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