100 WC 2-20-2020 Gabe

There was a pink giraffe whose name was Ellie. Ellie was a very famous singer in London, California, Maine, New Jersey, North Carolina, and South Carolina. She was very famous, her fans loved her and it seemed she had a perfect life but during a concert she sang out of shear pain she was stabbed.She awakened in a dusty hospital bed she tried to move but it was to painful for her.She closed her eyes she could feel herself rising slowly she opened her eyes and saw herself and heard long beep.She died shortly after she dreamed.

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  1. I would be interested to see this expanded into a longer piece so you could add more details and stretch out the story a bit. I want to know more about Ellie, why she traveled where she did, how/why she got stabbed... The line "she could feel herself rising slowly.." as she is sleeping is a powerful piece of imagery.

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