100 WC--Camryn 1/11/2019
The lights blinded him as the helicopter was hovering over him. He ran very fast so could to get away but after running for a while he got
tired and stopped to take a breath. When suddenly cop cars
surrounded him and than one of the cops came out of the cars.
“Stop where you are and put your hands up!” the man yelled
“You are under arrest for stealing my potato from my garden while I was basking in the sun.”
“I'm sorry but the potato was too perfect not to take!”
“Fine but buy me a new potato!”
Great beginning, I love how you set the scene.
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